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David Gillon ([personal profile] davidgillon) wrote in [community profile] awesomeers 2015-09-14 02:39 pm (UTC)

Completely rewrote (since Thursday) two chapters/45 pages of the novel, reducing the word-count by about 12.5%, eliminating passive voice, reworking verbal tags, not saying things twice etc. And finally sent it off to my #Pitchwars mentor for review about 5AM this morning at the end of a 12 hour editing session!

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